Agnes swayed the porch swing, gently pushing her toes into the wood to keep the slow movement going. She closed her eyes, lulled by the gentle sway and the cool summer breeze.
“Do you believe in fate?” She opened her eyes, looking at the elder woman sitting in her wicker chair.
“I believe that God has a plan for us all. What about you, dear?”
“I don’t know. I mean, I feel like I’m meant to be here – now – with you and Tomas. It feels like I was supposed to end up here at this moment in my life. But if everything is predestined, then what about the bad things I’ve done? I haven’t always been a good person.”
“Just because God has a plan for us, doesn’t mean that your life is set in stone from the moment you are born. He gave us choice. Sometimes we might make an unfavorable choice, but if you believe in His love and have faith in Him then you will be steered back onto the right path.”
Agnes thought about this for a while, rocking herself back and forth as Marilyn continued knitting what would eventually be a scarf.
“I don’t think I can believe in fate.”
Marilyn looked up from her knitting, watching Agnes with curious eyes.
“I don’t think I can believe in God.”
Marilyn’s brow furrowed and she returned to her knitting.
“Because if I did, then Matilda was doomed before she was even born.”
This piece was written as a part of my fictional work-in-progress, Finding Agnes. You can find more from Finding Agnes here.
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This week’s Red Writing Hood prompt: Write a fiction or creative non-fiction piece where fate plays a prominent role. You can write from the position of a complete belief or absolute disbelief in the role of fate in our lives or the lives of our characters. You have 400 words to play with.